Saturday, June 11, 2016

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is a river of light.
I'm a boat made of darkness
waves greedy of prosody
No sooner would forsake the wharf
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 July 2016

Crossing over the river of light! Nice work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 June 2016

She is a river of light. I'm a boat made of darkness waves greedy of prosody No sooner would forsake the wharf than drowning is inevitable fate Yet dream crossing... Wow, you write so beautifully. A truly passionate poem of love. Thanks for sharing the poem. 10 for it. Subhas

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