Friday, April 22, 2016

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stole a little piece of day
the world was sleeping through
to watch a mist of fog transform
my neighbor's lawn to fantasy.
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Barry Middleton
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Valsa George 24 April 2016

Each dawn is a harbinger of beauty and grace. It fills hearts with glee, still like the blue sky turning dark, sorrowful memories of yesterday can dampen the freshness of each new day!

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Barry Middleton 24 April 2016

Thank you for the comment. Glad you liked it.

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Norah Tunney 22 April 2016

I'm so glad you stole a little piece of day so we could share this enchanted moment. The second last verse I explains so concisely why I too love those early hours. The last verse lingers in the background how easy it is for us all to forsake hope. Thanks Barry

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Barry Middleton 22 April 2016

Thanks. I wrote this in the early 1970s.

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2016

You may have stolen a piece of day, but you generously shared it with all of us. Thanks, Barry

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Barry Middleton 22 April 2016

Thank you.......................................

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A beautiful poetry here.

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Barry Middleton 22 April 2016

Thank you....................................

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