Saturday, January 31, 2015

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

It floats and sails
In my mind, in my sleep
And in my day-journey.
I can put aside all my pains
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Neela Nath Das
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Bhat Naieem 18 March 2015

really great dream dream dream dream

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2015

Lovely piece of poetry penned with insight. A nice piece indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 February 2015

It turns venom to honey.- - In dream it is true but in real life it would be applied. Very nicely composed through dream. Good word choice. Many thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

A Beautiful poem Neela. Interesting lines..... Crucified I'm can't let out scream. Because always accompanies me, My Dream. Short and sweet dreams. Loved it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 03 February 2015

dream and dreaming inside turns into reality when stepping ahead for action outside

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Chuy Amante 02 February 2015

nice are you sure you know which is the dream and which is the Real Reality? for me, I think I dream 22 hrs. a day and experience reality 2 ? nice poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2015

very nice.short and sweet.liked it.

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