Friday, March 28, 2014

Dream Comments

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The silvery full moon was awaiting for me
When the nightingale was singing a song

I was with you in my dream
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Ruma Chaudhuri 28 April 2014

Dear Akhtar Jawad, Its a great inspiration for me that you are commenting me in this way. I became pause and speechless. Yesterday i emotionally sent you the poem. I am not a poet but a housewife. Its my hobby now to write. Lots of respect and love. I wish and pray a beautiful life for you. Your best friend Ruma

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Akhtar Jawad 28 April 2014

Khawab dekhti raho ke zindagi woh khawab hay jo khawab bib azab hay. Sapne hamen jeevit rakhte hain aur kabhi kabhi poore bhi ho jate haiyn. After my retirement I was gradually dying. I srvived a heart attack. Then I started uploading my poems on 23-3-2014. Within this short period I uploaded more than 60 poems. I am second most popular poet in Pakistan and at the moment I am 48th in the world. I fought with the proceeding death, I won and I am once more alive. I want that you should repeat the same. Don't be pessimistic be hopeful and write happy melodies. It's a good poem.

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Md Elias Uddin 28 March 2014

The silvery full moon was awaiting for me When the nightingale was singing a song I was with you in my dream So the moon became a crescent form. Nice.

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Ruma Chaudhuri

Ruma Chaudhuri

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