Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

round and round
I wander through my dreams
Moonlight shining from afar
As i paddle along the seashore
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darkness reigns
COMMENTS
Sandy Player 27 December 2012

Dreams are hateful mockeries. The poem is astounding; it really captured the in the moment dreaminess.

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2012

I open my eyes to the morning sunrise It was all a dream I say But the final whispered words echo to me so I wait And i dream Until I come... Upon thee. nice composition.

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