Monday, May 28, 2012

Dream,3 Senryu Comments

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life within a dream
death within life
empty the hands!
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Deep Mukherjee 02 June 2012

Can corelate my thinking to this poem very closely! ! ! ! ! a certain degree of cohesiveness exist between the lines; which gives it a beautiful essence......

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Shahzia Batool 30 May 2012

presence of abstract makes the concrete possible...eyes are nothing w/o sight, w/o dreams....i dint get why empty the hands? ? ? ...it's thought-provoking.....

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