Tuesday, June 12, 2012

*dream Comments

Rating: 4.1

If a dream
Breaks even
In a dream
You get hurt
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Abdul Wahab
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Fiona Kalu 18 November 2014

Talent indeed! keep up the good work.

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Awa Bah 08 April 2014

nice and good work my favorite line is -Life is like a cloud Without rain Body becomes a stem

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Deb Harman 29 March 2014

nice write, is to dream to the force of life it has so much depth in the poem love it

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Dan Hartmin 29 October 2013

This is a great poem i'm going to use this on my poem assignment for metaphors and smiles!

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Wahab Abdul 27 August 2013

yes, you can Kyris Rain

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Kyris Rain 27 August 2013

cAN i use this on wattpad if i give you all the credit?

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

excellent poem on dreams. so, make sure the body is not fed with that of the soul which is dead.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 June 2012

the first two lines have so much depth. shan

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Vipins Puthooran 12 June 2012

the dream is the driving force of life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! really an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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