If a dream
Breaks even
In a dream
You get hurt
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nice and good work my favorite line is -Life is like a cloud Without rain Body becomes a stem
nice write, is to dream to the force of life it has so much depth in the poem love it
This is a great poem i'm going to use this on my poem assignment for metaphors and smiles!
excellent poem on dreams. so, make sure the body is not fed with that of the soul which is dead.
the dream is the driving force of life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! really an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Talent indeed! keep up the good work.