Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Dream Comments

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I dreamt last night of a mysterious forest,
I dreamt of a most beautiful place.
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A. Michael Sears 28 February 2006

I can see the wood...for some reason it seems a bit scary to me. Like a big bad wolf is going to pop around the corner and chew on me for a bit. The good news...not nearly as bad as you had hoped, my dear. The point is that the imagery is good...I can picture the scene. Better luck next time on writing a poem worse than mine. Much love, ams

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Alice Kriel

Alice Kriel

Douglas, South Africa; Currently in UK
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