Dream Comments

a man is not perfect. striving for it can seem impossible. when God made you, you always had the Spirit of a person. a bird, a blue sky, a green field. they can only express their 'emotions' in two colors. brown and green. while men, can express their emotions in not just colors, but words just like this poem! think about it...

Awww, nice write keep expressing your self

nice visual metaphors of color: ''I dream to be blue sky, I dream to be green field, '' and nice descriptive poem of nature....10+

To be one's self and not deceive yourself.

I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet. Oh! Oh! ..Last line is well expressed. But, dear........ Please don't think in that way.....Be optimistic........10 for the message...Brishti

the best i loved in dis piece is the last line.. 'I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet' wonderful writing..

I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet.....beautiful write. all can be tolerated but not a man worthless creature.... read mine' all dreams not come true... though on different line... well done

You have crafted the unseen dream with nice imageries. Very lovely poem,10+++

We all have dreams in life.