Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Dream Comments

Rating: 3.7

I had a dream, a dream of you
You and Me in far land
Alone
Land of dreams, full of trees
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Mohammed AlBalushi
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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

Wonderful descriptive poem about colors, thank you for sharing.................10

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Catrina Heart 11 August 2009

colorful dream..such a beautiful representation...........Thanks! ! ! 10+++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 August 2009

nice figures! A fine poem

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Shine of the stars and light of complete moon White I had a dream, a dream of you You and Me in far land Alone to feel good it is ok.. but good narration and lovely to read...10 all dreams mot come true.....mary to marry

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Obinna Eruchie 19 July 2009

An interesting dream. It is penned beautifully.

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Aziz Alkaabi 01 April 2009

Dear Mohammed, You have so many beautiful and colourful images here. Some like the joyful crab I like very much. Daydreaming or dreaming in general is a powerful fountain of inspirations and you managed to relay some and express them just fine. Aziz

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Eyan Desir 30 March 2009

HA, good write.............

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Deependra Kumar Jha 25 March 2009

I enjoyed reading your dream! keep dreaming, my friend! 10

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Honest Heart 22 March 2009

i love the natural flow to this, it's very easy to read. wonderful job!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 March 2009

My 10 for this colorful dreamy composition.

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Honest Heart 19 March 2009

this is incredible, beautiful work. just wow.

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Mohammed AlBalushi

Mohammed AlBalushi

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