Thursday, April 5, 2007

Dream 2 Comments

Rating: 3.0

a morning breaking
a dawn awakening
quite suddenly
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Ben Gieske
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 May 2009

Lovely and dreamy. Wonderful poem on dream. You have used marvelous metaphor. I love personification of dream.10 added earlier.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

Lovely and dreamy.10++

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Sidi Mahtrow 28 July 2007

Your vivid imagery reminds me of poems by my brother. Here's a sampling of his: Gifts for All A. William Wortham (1927 - 1990) Flashes of lightening, Claps of thunder, Whispering wind, And gentle rain. Tiny streams, Roaring rapids, Moving rivers, And white capped waves. Majestic mountains, Misty meadows, Towering trees, And clear blue skies. Midnight moon, Dew cast dawn, Brilliant sun, And fragrant flowers. Musicians' music, Poets's poems, Artists' art, And gifts from God.

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