Thursday, February 12, 2009

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

On bed now, eyes on ceiling
Wondering, caring
What’s next?
Darkness comes in, caressing
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Noel Horlanda
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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

a nice composition...well dramatized piece! ! ! excellent! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 October 2009

nice write here! By the way, thanks for reading and commenting on my poems.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

Deamy dreamy dramy Papaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you're with me! Excellent. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Romeo Della Valle 25 September 2009

Dear friend, dreaming is stamped in all of us, since we are all human beings, it is mother nature manifesting itself, we learn the hard and painful ways that not all dreams come true, and whenever they do, they are not longer dreams but visions...Great piece, keep it going, you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Surya . 07 June 2009

papa has come to give his blessings.very nice poem voted10 surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

'Only a dream realizing What its meaning' Very nice and lovely poem on dream. 10+++ It is melodious and there is a nice idea with it.

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yes always it is dream realising. it is beautiful sir, On firing squd i may reques you to go through'do we need banevolent dictator'

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