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In this place of heavy stars and
Swollen moon hanging high above,
Like a bird through the sky, you are thrust
Deep into my head, and become everything.
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This poem is not only beautiful, but shows a great deal of passion. It truly touches my heart, I love it. A fabulous read, very well done Lipstick.--Melvina--
Every whispered memory, Consumes every awakened moment ^^ Love those lines. This one's a passionate piece, i like it more because its subtle, soft and not in-your-face. Good work! : D Preets
How very beautiful - I love the imagery here and the passion oozes out of this piece. Well Done....... HG x
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8/2/2025 10:51:57 PM # 1.0.0
deep desire pours through your verse with hints of obsession. strong work. -Tailor