Wednesday, January 21, 2009
Dream Comments
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have a dream,
dream of anything u want.
when u go down the stream,
believe anything u want.
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Akito Emo
21 January 2009
this is so nice... i wish my dream wil come true! ! ! i like it very much!
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8/5/2025 8:26:47 PM # 1.0.0
The first line of the last verse needs to be written again. It makes no sense. Also, the ' u ' s need to be replaced by ' you '. It just doesn't work any other way. These divert attention from the message. Otherwise, I found it to be a pleasant writing. GW62