There she was,
wrapped up in a pretty french gown.
Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright
were dazzling like the moonlight.
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Dreams can be so real and put you in a good mood. I’m glad you had a good dream.
wow....what a dream...wished you never woke up. Lovely poem.
What is a poet without a dream? It is like a writer without a pen. A beautiful poem with gorgeous images. 10 Karin Anderson
nice double simile: ''She spread her arms like a wing as if inviting me to come in'' wonderful portrait, well written poem.10+++
Beautiful par excellence an enthralling write siddharth - thanks for inviting me
nice dream.. nice and clear description.. the suspense and picture is vivid.. thanks for sharing 10/10 lovelots, Maia
A dream which can bring life to someone is always lively.... :) a good imaginative work.
dream wil always stay in poetry! ! ! wonderful write! ! ! ! amazing usage! !
Wow! What a lovely poem. The flow of the poem & the words used made me think that was it actually a dream or reality. u get a 10++++++.
nice poem Siddharth.... short and sweet. Please read my poems called ADILA, My Dream and Lets dream...hope you shall find them worth your while
I liked the lines: Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright were dazzling like the moonlight. And: Her breath on my face felt like the first drops of rain. My! ! ! A beautiful piece you have painted here. A dreamy picture like a dream. I enjoyed reading every word. Have a nice day. B.B.