Friday, July 10, 2009

Dream. Comments

Rating: 4.9

There she was,
wrapped up in a pretty french gown.
Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright
were dazzling like the moonlight.
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siddharth singh.
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Anonymous Butterfly 28 April 2010

I liked the lines: Her glistening pair of eyes shining bright were dazzling like the moonlight. And: Her breath on my face felt like the first drops of rain. My! ! ! A beautiful piece you have painted here. A dreamy picture like a dream. I enjoyed reading every word. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Pamela Lutwyche 03 April 2010

Dreams can be so real and put you in a good mood. I’m glad you had a good dream.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 21 February 2010

wow....what a dream...wished you never woke up. Lovely poem.

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 27 October 2009

A beautiful dream, well composed 10++

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Anupama Raghavendran 07 October 2009

lovely......the imagery is too good....: D

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Excellent touch down. Wow! Ten Ms. Nivedita UK

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Annabel Sheila 17 August 2009

Loved it! The imagery was beautiful! Great job. Anna

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2009

Ammmmmazing pictograph! Amazing wording! 10+

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What is a poet without a dream? It is like a writer without a pen. A beautiful poem with gorgeous images. 10 Karin Anderson

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Marieta Maglas 08 August 2009

nice double simile: ''She spread her arms like a wing as if inviting me to come in'' wonderful portrait, well written poem.10+++

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Angela Michel 05 August 2009

Excellent, unexpected ending.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 03 August 2009

Beautiful par excellence an enthralling write siddharth - thanks for inviting me

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Preeti Chauhan 01 August 2009

This one makes one wish for more...

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 July 2009

nice dream.. nice and clear description.. the suspense and picture is vivid.. thanks for sharing 10/10 lovelots, Maia

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Deepti Agarwal 24 July 2009

A dream which can bring life to someone is always lively.... :) a good imaginative work.

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 22 July 2009

dream wil always stay in poetry! ! ! wonderful write! ! ! ! amazing usage! !

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Ruchi Poddar 21 July 2009

Wow! What a lovely poem. The flow of the poem & the words used made me think that was it actually a dream or reality. u get a 10++++++.

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Nikunj Sharma 20 July 2009

nice poem Siddharth.... short and sweet. Please read my poems called ADILA, My Dream and Lets dream...hope you shall find them worth your while

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Rishi Poddar 19 July 2009

she was katrina kaif

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Lynda Robson 15 July 2009

What a wonderful dream, well composed piece, 10 Lynda xx

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