Wednesday, October 8, 2008

.dream Comments

Rating: 2.8

Traveling in the passage of time,
With youthful dreams divine,
After relentless endeavor to shine,
Waning without a lifeline.
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Kesav Easwaran 11 October 2008

well.. life is either a 'dream travel' or a 'travel dream'... good meaningful write...10

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Chitra - 10 October 2008

fine ryhtm and what a tranformational write

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Deepti Agarwal 10 October 2008

must say..a lovely dream... :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Very beautiful poem. Very good rhyming and good read..........flowed smoothly.........10

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Mamta Agarwal 08 October 2008

a lovely poem Vidyadhar ji, last few lines philosophical.10

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Leela Devi 08 October 2008

i like it....................

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C T Heart 08 October 2008

Tied with hope in my dreams, never ending desire to wish and share a kiss to my love ones---great piece.Thanks.10.

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