Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Dream Comments

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What do you dream of when you go to sleep?
The little memories you like to keep.
A fantisy you hope to become real,
a nightmare to make you screal,
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Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

The idea in poetry is simple but hard to execute. You want to say the most meaningful thing you can. By using the fewest words possible. This was a good job. GW62

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