Dre@m Of Love Comments

this is very touching. i like it.

'With the winds playing the music of our hearts, and the waves singing 'Tho never shall be apart.' We danced on the beach in the moonlight, with the stars twinkling ever so bright. We were lost in the love of each others eyes, and we found a whole new paradise.' Loooved it! ! beautiful write!

A nice write up of a lovely dream which every young woman must have but few achieve.

dream and your love sealed safe...good romantic piece

The love of dream.........a good write..........

Kept safe! Yeah, it spoke of the reality that when we want something to remain in us… we are always trying to find a way to not to lose it. Your dream of love will hopefully be reality.

awwwwwwwww........ sweet and nice

keep your dreams tight and close to you, they are quite precious...I liked the images here...the beach, moonlight and the jar....good poem

I liked the nature within the dream, I did the marriage theme around twp rings once. Nice write

Thank God Tanvi....that was a dream......such marriages are void in the eyes of law.but there was a tender romantic ambience about the whole poem......and it was innocent as well....good...well done....

A wonderful romantic poem! ! And a wonderful dream as well.keep writing....Merna

If only this could happen in real life too me.. I really like the poem...

lovely...a innocnt dream.....i admired the last two lines, talkin abt sealin t n a jar....nice thought....let te dream be always thre within u.........good work...

Some dreams come true

Skillful musical outpouring of sweet emotions. CP

Very finely crafted love in dream sequence. And love in reality will be much more bliss-giving.

Tanvi it's really such a pleasure to read your poems. Dream of love is really a very nice romantic poem.. kip writing dear.

I like it veyr much. holing.. should be holding. :)

Nice rhymes girl i like the eyes to paradise rhyme it was very clever :)

a spectrum of love, emitting resonant emotions.