Saturday, June 13, 2020

Drawing My Own Conclusions Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'd been caught up in the middle, of one of those awful days,
When nothing seems to go right, with glitches and delays.

I was having a rough day at work, and the boss was now irate;
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Jayne Louise Davies 03 October 2024

Brilliant write! Top marks *****

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Kim Barney 02 October 2024

A fantastic, fun poem! You have such a wonderful imagination!

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

I had some poetic 'business' with you several years ago and I hope you are still around. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

Evelyn, WOW, WOW, WOW! ! ! ! ! Holy Cow! What a great, GREAT poem this is. I've made it a favorite and awarded it five stars; I wish it could be more. With goodness in your poetic heart, too bad you weren't 'God' at 'the start'. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

This got a BIG laugh from me [ok, not too big]: So I quickly sketched him dancing, with ballet like pirouettes, '

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

DRAW ME WITH A POT OF GOLD, more than I could ever hold, but draw with me 5 Olympic Heavyweight Weight Lifters there to help me carry it to my bank! !

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

And 'reality itself might shift.' and all of your great rhyming, and the whole idea of the future-telling drawings, I 'love

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

Evelyn, I esp. enjoyed reading 'for contrariness' sake'. THAT gets me in trouble at home. Yikes!

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

This: 'And if she had chanced to see it, I might've never worked again.' caused me to laugh (moderately) . bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2024

Ah! Colored pencils. I wondered if you'd be drawing with pencil, ink, crayons, or charcoal. I just read Belle's limerick 'bout me calling her a name. I MUST have been teasing her. I now have apologized. : ) bri

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Rob Lamberton 14 June 2024

A positive outlook can change one's life! !

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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2024

A magical poem indeed!

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Alain Joubert 14 October 2022

Well, magic has found you! ! Or you have found magic! ! What ever happened first, it is still sublime! !

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Chinedu Dike 24 December 2021

Merry Christmas Madam. Remain Blessed.

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Bharati Nayak 02 December 2021

Bri's poem brought me here.A fantastic poem.I wish I could have such abilities --I believe what you say in this poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 November 2021

You enjoy Van morrison? I do too

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David Wood 29 November 2021

You have painted a magical poem!

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2021

Evelyn, NOW this PC does NOT show 'Comments' at tail end of the title! ! ! I swear it was there earlier. hmmm? ? ? bri

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2021

I hope to be able to share this with others on PH and beyond in the 'near future'. Draw THAT! ! ! Lovely, indeed. bri ;) THANKS

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Bri Edwards 29 November 2021

If the title dropped 'Comments', I'd call it VERY CLEVER. Ok, it's clever enough. And this is, by far, one of the very best, for me very entertaining, poems i've ever read. : ) bri

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