I'd been caught up in the middle, of one of those awful days,
When nothing seems to go right, with glitches and delays.
I was having a rough day at work, and the boss was now irate;
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I had some poetic 'business' with you several years ago and I hope you are still around. bri : )
Evelyn, WOW, WOW, WOW! ! ! ! ! Holy Cow! What a great, GREAT poem this is. I've made it a favorite and awarded it five stars; I wish it could be more. With goodness in your poetic heart, too bad you weren't 'God' at 'the start'. : ) bri
This got a BIG laugh from me [ok, not too big]: So I quickly sketched him dancing, with ballet like pirouettes, '
DRAW ME WITH A POT OF GOLD, more than I could ever hold, but draw with me 5 Olympic Heavyweight Weight Lifters there to help me carry it to my bank! !
And 'reality itself might shift.' and all of your great rhyming, and the whole idea of the future-telling drawings, I 'love
Evelyn, I esp. enjoyed reading 'for contrariness' sake'. THAT gets me in trouble at home. Yikes!
This: 'And if she had chanced to see it, I might've never worked again.' caused me to laugh (moderately) . bri ;)
Ah! Colored pencils. I wondered if you'd be drawing with pencil, ink, crayons, or charcoal. I just read Belle's limerick 'bout me calling her a name. I MUST have been teasing her. I now have apologized. : ) bri
Well, magic has found you! ! Or you have found magic! ! What ever happened first, it is still sublime! !
Bri's poem brought me here.A fantastic poem.I wish I could have such abilities --I believe what you say in this poem.
Evelyn, NOW this PC does NOT show 'Comments' at tail end of the title! ! ! I swear it was there earlier. hmmm? ? ? bri
I hope to be able to share this with others on PH and beyond in the 'near future'. Draw THAT! ! ! Lovely, indeed. bri ;) THANKS
If the title dropped 'Comments', I'd call it VERY CLEVER. Ok, it's clever enough. And this is, by far, one of the very best, for me very entertaining, poems i've ever read. : ) bri
Brilliant write! Top marks *****