Every time I draw a heart,
I feel like mine is being torn apart.
I may laugh and I may smile,
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Interesting writing, I really like the words you have strung together, they form a beautiful poem. I hope you will continue to write.
If these are foreign feelings to you...then fine....because feelings that are far from you could not be put in words so well...nice one...
Beautifully written, the flow to this poem is phenomenal, spectaculiar right my dear. :)