Draw the blinds, Time
Its time enough and enough
Time to grieve: I do not want
The sun to weighten closed lids;
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Almost has an Emily Dickenson flavor. The thought is well expressed. Read mine – In Answer to Her Letter – Adeline
loved it, words and expressions are too good.happy to read it, structure of the poem is absolutely fantastic.keep it up! May God Bless You! ! ! ! ! !
a beautiful way of addressing the cycle of grief, i like the cohesive structure between stanzas and how each focuses on different periods of the cycle.
Great poem I've felt like this myself