Monday, December 8, 2008

Draw String Comments

Rating: 2.7

The curtains in my living room
lift and fall
gracefully
as I pull their strings each day;
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Lonnie Hicks
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Pandian Angelina 16 July 2009

From common object seen everyday You draw your metaphor for the night The nights of joy and love You compare to seasons gay And days so bright The curtains also make way For you to seek with hope The reunion of your love! Wonderful as always! Angel

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Chuck Petz 21 December 2008

Plays with memory and the heart Exquisitley!

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Lonnie Hicks

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