Draw (A Riddle To Solve) Poem by Rob Lamberton

Draw (A Riddle To Solve)

Rating: 4.8


Draw you ugly red headed raptor for you can sense death
Characteristic teetering before you fall into the draw
Flesh rots in the desert sun but not before it's eaten

Draw (A Riddle To Solve)
Wednesday, January 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Riddle,Poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thought I would try my hand at a Western!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 31 January 2023

NOW I'm sure Rob means Turkey Vulture, but.....is it really a raptor? One online site says it is, though I'd call it a scavenger and I don't THINK it has 'sharp talons'.

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

I have spent some time studying ornithology and assure you a Turkey Vulture is a raptor.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 February 2023

A vivid depiction of a bird of prey. A unique and clever write.

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2023

The second use of draw may refer to a geological feature, like a small valley, ...'A draw could be considered as the initial formation of a valley.', as might be found in a desert. : )

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2023

I don't understand the use of 'draw' as the first word of the poem. It makes me think of 'drawing' a handgun from a holster or belt to a shooting position.

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

You understand perfectly!

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

That is intended as I am purposing to accomplish multiple themes at once. You're right where you should be! Hope you're ready to draw! Kidding of course you would likely be faster!

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2023

A California Condor is like a Turkey Vulture on steroids, but CC's almost became extinct in the 1900s and there may be a breeding program led by people to increase their numbers in the wild. : ) bri

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

You are a wizard!

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2023

When I looked up a map of areas of N. America inhabited by T. Vultures [which showed TV's in most of the U.S., including MANY non-desert areas], I (cont.) ...

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