Friday, January 29, 2016

Drama Of Life Comments

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I don't have any control on my role in drama of life
Predestined will occur to control my destiny
I may be in solace or on the sharp blade of knife
I may be lost in dust or on the edge of eternity
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Kim Barney 29 January 2016

You do have a choice. There is no predestination. We are all here on this Earth to be tested and tried BECAUSE of our choices. You can choose to be good, or choose to be evil. You chose to call this poem a limerick. (It is not a limerick.) You were not predestined to do that. It was your choice. You can choose to be offended by my remarks, or you can choose to forgive me because we have different beliefs. I like the poem, even though I disagree with the philosophy.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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