Drama Named Desire*(Originally Titled 'Passion') Comments

The anatomy of desire finds an eloquent expression in your words.

Desire passion whichever it is both and it is brillant -10

u may be right, sarvesh. what u suggested sounds logical too. my problem is i couldn't decide which triggers which. moreover, you know by now that what i write is determined by the moment i experience that fleeting emotion that i try to express as closer to its authenticity as possible...thnq for ur suggestion. let me rethink...

hmm...yes...true. i would put it more as, 'desire hurled into the wilderness of passion' just telling. loved the poem though.

if one were the unravel the metaphors in this........... draws would drop. this is good.

'directionless yet directed' Wow Indira... wonderful piece... That is quite relevant to me... But even one falls to the ground, yet it feels lovely to soar high with endless desire... Beautiful...