Each stanza adds another layer to this poem, each one unique and exciting. The first is a dramatic scene of REAL LIFE; it has the tension of not knowing what to expect as you await the arrival of the guy but you want him to come! The second stanza is my favorite because he gives you a guileless (and very original) compliment in confessing the different effects your presence, your personality has on him. He is astonished by you! He doesn't say tired old things like You're beautiful which suggests you're a statue. Instead he recognizes there are depths inside you that deeply move him in a variety of ways. He has an insight into your soul and he doesn't say anything vain or boastful about himself. He may not realize this but he is granting you your FREEDOM to decide
what's next. And at very least the last stanza shows you are on the same wavelength.
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Each stanza adds another layer to this poem, each one unique and exciting. The first is a dramatic scene of REAL LIFE; it has the tension of not knowing what to expect as you await the arrival of the guy but you want him to come! The second stanza is my favorite because he gives you a guileless (and very original) compliment in confessing the different effects your presence, your personality has on him. He is astonished by you! He doesn't say tired old things like You're beautiful which suggests you're a statue. Instead he recognizes there are depths inside you that deeply move him in a variety of ways. He has an insight into your soul and he doesn't say anything vain or boastful about himself. He may not realize this but he is granting you your FREEDOM to decide what's next. And at very least the last stanza shows you are on the same wavelength.