Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Dragons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dedicated to Joan Moorcroft.

They were in a small plastic bag,
There were six of them painted green,
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Michael Moorcroft
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Latasha Hall 23 September 2009

I love this piece. It's very reflective and I can sense the emotion that you are holding in. Once you realease all that emotion, believe me, you will get your best poetry. Go somewhere quiet and fathom all of an event that broke you or hurt you, and just start writing your poem. Even if it sounds weird a tfirst, keep going. That's what I did. =] p.s. u can always go back and correct or amend things.

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what happen to her? this poem has a lot of emotions... it is like you are holding back a tear.

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