Saturday, April 16, 2022

Dragonfly Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today on the trail
the temperature high
the humidity heavy
like a beast of burden-
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Smoky Hoss
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Rob Lamberton 16 November 2022

Dragonflies have inspired me too. Creation is a marvel!

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Glen Kappy 31 May 2022

Smoky, good soul, I smile and appreciate, they had no sunglasses. Glad to see you continue writing. I haven't written a poem in a while, and I have I haven't posted to PH. Keep the faith, brother. -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2022

Let me quote-'basking in the harsh heat and burning rays of intense illumination. They had no sunglasses (that I could see) , no sweat on brow (that I could tell) , they were so unperturbed in their singular purpose of enjoyment, '

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2022

What does the idiom'Living in the moment ' signify? Find it in this poem.A marvellous poem, thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 25 April 2022

sing to me of dragonflies, my friend, on my ride through the desert... I keep being drawn back to this poem

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 18 April 2022

These little moments sum up to make the life eventful. Full ******

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2. Fantastic, smoky.5 *s and Myfav

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One of the oldest surviving inhabitants of earth, dragon flies endure extreme conditions easily. This idea is concealed most subtly in the poem, to corroborate the positive energy that exudes the poem.

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Susan Williams 17 April 2022

I fell in love with this poem, Smoky. Thank God we are blessed by such moments that give us the encouragement to ride on... a thousand stars on this and I also faved it so I would reread and reread

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Kim Barney 16 April 2022

Your dragonfly moment is a moment to be remembered, and I have added this five-star poem to my favorites.

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