Sunday, November 1, 2015

Dragonfly - Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.8

Gentle laps underwater
buzzing shadow darkened sky
heralds hovering - dragonfly
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Seema Jayaraman
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Kelly Kurt 03 November 2015

I have written about the dragonfly as well. It is a fascinating creature. Thanks, Seema

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

Thank you Kelly for stopping by, I will definitely read the dragonfly written by you. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

Superb...In shadow....a dragonfly...Liked it.

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Seema Jayaraman 03 November 2015

Thank you Asim.

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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2015

Amazing thoughts running through the brevity of this poem. Thanks.

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Seema Jayaraman 01 November 2015

Thank you Rajnishji, I invite you to read a rather long and unedited raw poem more a protest I uploaded yday against a serious social crime titled All Trussed Up... Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

Darkened sky and dragonfly sing wise and wonderful haiku in imagery shared. Nice sharing....10

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