Friday, October 2, 2009

Dragonfly, Dragonfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dragonfly, dragonfly,
Please don't pass me by
Wait with me a little while
Whilst I look, wonder and smile
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Rani Turton
COMMENTS
Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

Superb Write Ma'am... I got a lovely trip down my memory lane. I had a lot of these hovering, compound eyed playmates during my childhood. There were the usual helicopter resembling ones and also another type which resembles a one inch long green needle. I am fortunate then and now, for they come to me...i have felt their sticky feet..even taken pictures of them in close proximity.

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This is enchanting Rani with impeccable rhyme and I floated down the page as I read it. I agree with Indira and it would be excellent in a children's text book. 10

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Kesav Easwaran 03 October 2009

a good poem...pleasing to mind refreshing...thanks Rani...10

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Meggie Gultiano 02 October 2009

A lovely write Rani..This is beautiful

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

You have really done justice to the Dragonfly....a lovely poem indeed Rani - thank you for sharing this poem with us

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Patti Masterman 02 October 2009

I like this so much. I am a great fan of dragonflies and this does them much justice. That question; 'did you teach the planes to fly', it's so charming. thanks for this

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2009

should included in children's text book...this is so simple and utterly butterly chweet!

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