Friday, June 17, 2016

Dragonfly … 08 0616 Comments

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…..of nymphs and "nereids'.


Nimbly slung from delicate wings
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Susan Williams 19 January 2017

Excellent word choices to carry the dragonfly theme- - fairs, delicate wings, lustrous shades, as she files colors scatter, rainbow smiles, drifting hither and thither as the wind blows- - -EXCEPTIONAL attention to detail! And oh how I respond to the following stanzas: . Young and nubile she rises and sings From murmuring streams with her brings . A musical air from posse of gods Where fairies dance and nature nods . An exciting introduction to your poems! ! ! Cab't wait to read more!

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2016

Nicely woven words and beautiful rhyme scheme makesthe poem a delightful reading.

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Yasmin Khan 25 June 2016

A delightful poem in admiration of a dragonfly. How keenly you have observed it or recalled from your childhood.

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Shreej K.c 18 June 2016

I have always been fascinated by the dragonfly and of course tried to catch one when I was a child! Lovely couplets with such details. Enjoyed it :)

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Leonard Dabydeen 17 June 2016

A beautiful sonnet, with interestingly enjoyable rhyming couplets. You have painted the 'dragonfly' with sensitive imagery, bringing it flawlessly to life in your reader's mind. Enjoy the read. ~ Leonard Dabydeen

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