It comes within the dark of moon, black wind
whispering 'neath leather wings. Seeking,
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Wow! ! ! Very powerful imagery. Have you read The Road by Cormack McCarthy? He describes an ancient creature in one chapter that came to mind when I read your poem. Nice work Mr. Jarrett.
I'm guessing a nightmare? Vividly descriptive and colorful, with an everbuilding feeling of fear and dread. You have a powerfully creative imagination, Jim, and it flows across the page brilliantly. Great read! Linda :)
You have such vivid powers of description. Jim this is prose which keeps the reader glued to the page, and I may say, half afraid..... so very well penned. fondly from Fay.
Are you an Author per chance, if you see this the way I did, without the rhyme, , as a story, , , try it, , it's very powerful All the best Love duncan X
Thanks a lot James Jarret. So beautifully described! ! I'm using it to teach students about mythical creatures!