Sunday, July 20, 2008

Dragon Comments

Rating: 4.9

It comes within the dark of moon, black wind

whispering 'neath leather wings. Seeking,
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James Timothy Jarrett
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Rach Dash 01 September 2020

Thanks a lot James Jarret. So beautifully described! ! I'm using it to teach students about mythical creatures!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 February 2013

Really good piece of work. Enjoyed it very much.

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Shirley Hanley 19 September 2009

Wow! ! ! Very powerful imagery. Have you read The Road by Cormack McCarthy? He describes an ancient creature in one chapter that came to mind when I read your poem. Nice work Mr. Jarrett.

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Linda Ori 23 May 2009

I'm guessing a nightmare? Vividly descriptive and colorful, with an everbuilding feeling of fear and dread. You have a powerfully creative imagination, Jim, and it flows across the page brilliantly. Great read! Linda :)

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Fay Slimm 17 September 2008

You have such vivid powers of description. Jim this is prose which keeps the reader glued to the page, and I may say, half afraid..... so very well penned. fondly from Fay.

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Duncan Wyllie 01 August 2008

Are you an Author per chance, if you see this the way I did, without the rhyme, , as a story, , , try it, , it's very powerful All the best Love duncan X

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