Thursday, November 19, 2015
Draft Poems Comments
Rating: ★5.0
For now I serve
my deep emotions
'piping hot' unseasoned
fresh off my hot head
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Kumarmani Mahakul
23 November 2015
Very deep emotions speak here about expression of thought in each line. Day definitely arrives to awake universal conscience. Interesting and nice drafting shared.....10
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10/21/2025 4:18:22 PM # 1.0.0
Keep them fresh. Revisit and add lines. Fresh poem has its rhythm, let rhyme be kept aside. Polished diamond loses its weight.