Shh...
silence sweeps the crowd
of anxious faces
waiting to see
...
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Ah.... Phil would be so chuffed! This is so cool - well done! For me personally, you just made my day... I love his lyrics. If you want to hear really poetic lyrics, listen to songs he recorded with Genesis also. When I was a teenager, I fell in love with this boy while we were listening to Genesis in the gardens of a castle in England (I cannot remember where it was cos he was all there was in the world in that moment in time)
oh my word i totally love this piece, you are a great writer and a phenominal poet
absolutely amazing poem 10/10 would read again