Monday, April 20, 2009

*dr. Jones Comments

Rating: 3.1

I choked on the lie that had become me
I choked on the confessional proclaiming
My innocence when partaking in the Body of Christ
It caught in my throat like a log in my eye
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Ted Sheridan
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Clayton Young 05 May 2009

I like how all your poems are short yet strong and effective and they get the point across, Check mine out if you get the time, :)

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Ken E Hall 04 May 2009

Let the second inquisition begin Dr Jones...onward christian soldiers marching on to war., it sure is enough to make you choke and the spear of this poem deserves a ++++++10 regards

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Akram Saqib 27 April 2009

good lesson with proverb used in the poem.

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fanniesson - 25 April 2009

you’re gonna burn for this one where this came from I’d like to visit excellent write/ mike f

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