Downstream Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Downstream

Rating: 5.0


Longing to sail
on the clear water
of the stream
sparkling in the sunlight
I rowed my boat
up the stream
again and again.

Down the stream
the current of water
pushing my boat.
Water became filthy
more and more
as the boat moved
down the stream.

Sunday, August 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: environment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 30 August 2020

A well composed poetic expression. Truly impressive.....10+++

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2020

When you talk of river, rowing of boat up the stream or down the stream also bring us face to face with acute water pollution and other environmental issues. Thanks.

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