Downpour (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Downpour (Senryu)



humid summer day
struggling air conditioner
only hope, some rain

© 2016

Sunday, July 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Park 31 July 2016

Weather gods need to intervene and give us some relief. In the interim, this senryu was fun to read. That even rhymed!

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Gil Highlander 31 July 2016

not a leaf outside my window is moving. yes we need some rain!

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

The dew points have been in the 70s and 80s here for quite a while. Occasional rain thins the air briefly and I enjoy it while it lasts

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