Tuesday, July 27, 2010

***downpour*** Comments

Rating: 2.7

Felt cold of my skin*
The downpour descend very Quick*
I'saw the sky fully of darkness*
I'look at the dark everything around me*
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 August 2010

Rainy tawny Poem…symbolizing with fiancée…blooming …dancing…billowing… feet- tapping…emotion…all in one…romance-aureate [Elaborately ornamented] …wow! So much romance…just a minuscule for me pliss for poetry...lolouuud… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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as an elemental, i love the rain, if i walk in it alone. the downpour descends and releases receptive feelings of appreciation. you are alone in the downpour of your love, alone until the moments of his return.

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