Sunday, February 18, 2007

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I'll let you lean on me like that brick wall
I'll let you put your back agaisnt me like that tall oak in the park
I'll be that friend you hold
until you can't feel a thing
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Faith Wood
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The Dead Poet 18 February 2007

its a great poem Aldo! I especially like the lines: What does it take to be that log that dances in the flames? That loaf of bread that crumbles? I felt that part the most

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Aldo Kraas 18 February 2007

This is not a bad poem

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Faith Wood

Faith Wood

Albany, Ny
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