Thursday, June 1, 2006

Downfall Comments

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The rain,
rushing down the window
like wives and mothers running
to the pit head when disaster strikes.
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jayne jenkins
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Elya Thorn 01 June 2006

Wow, beautiful, original....creative writing, great power of expression! I love this poem! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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