Thursday, February 23, 2023

Downfall Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unexpected brink
I rushed straight over the edge
Will survive I think
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Rob Lamberton
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Nosheen Irfan 25 February 2023

Going over the edge is sometimes the best survival strategy. Our comfort zone is very limiting. A little adventure is good for the soul.Great piece!

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Richard Wlodarski 24 February 2023

Metaphysical in scope. Love the suspense of it all, Rob!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 February 2023

I love it Rob Bravo and kudos

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2023

A wonderful poem so cleverly and succinctly written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 February 2023

Brink always brings risks.But if we can conquer it, we feel so good and sometimes liberated.

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