Friday, December 14, 2007

Downer Of The Day. Comments

Rating: 4.3

Its a downer of a day
all miserable, angry
no other way,
weathers so dreary,
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Ricky Owen
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You do a fine job expressing the misery of a gray day, yet managing to work in a bit of hope. Peace, L&T

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Frank Cannon 20 January 2008

You wrote about the rain and brought sunshine to my day. Good trick! !

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Virginia Her 15 December 2007

Great! Though this poem was about 'downers', it kind of made me cheer up a little? =) nice job!

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