Its a downer of a day
all miserable, angry
no other way, 
weathers so dreary,
                
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You wrote about the rain and brought sunshine to my day. Good trick! !
Great! Though this poem was about 'downers', it kind of made me cheer up a little? =) nice job!
You do a fine job expressing the misery of a gray day, yet managing to work in a bit of hope. Peace, L&T