Saturday, May 14, 2016

Downbeat Comments

Rating: 5.0

rhythm of the wave
is like the rhythm
of the heart
is like the rhythm
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Barry Middleton
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Michael Walkerjohn 14 May 2016

Aloha Barry... Fools on the hill... Hey, who is that there standing beside you? Pan? Nice word work my brother... pardon the puns... It is after all, Saturday! and the weekend and we are at Bernies! Having a warm Guinness and a smoke... the doors and windows are opened and you have placed the ball in our court...15-love! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Barry Middleton 14 May 2016

LOL - thanks. No one is on the hill with me, I am alone and I like it that way.

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M Asim Nehal 14 May 2016

Superb Imagery and nice poem, Loved it...10++++

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Barry Middleton 14 May 2016

Thank you. Very glad you liked it..................

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