Down To The Beach Comments

Thank you Sylvia for sharing the amazing poetry.

Nice poem. I picked it for my literature home work

Down to the beach Where young lovers closely nestle As sand creatures cause the sand to bristle Seagulls gliding in the air with screams and whistles Kids picking up shells and building stormy sand castles Down to the beach Where mostly good vibes flow Down to the beach We go whilst there is still sun without snow

awesome poem love it

great poem never heardanything like it

The poem is very creative; I like the fact that everything goes incline with everything else. When you started to talk about sun lotion made me realize why i hate the beach. The poem really makes me think about my own experience as a kid to the beach; picking up shells n what not.

This poem took me out of this cubicle and to a sandy haven. I wish I could read more like this at sharingpoetry.com.

what a cool poems

this is very nice poem

i love this poem! it got a great vibe to it, one that can make someone happy! love it!