Sunday, October 21, 2012

Down The Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer sun
And fairground turn,
Afternoon edge
On the cusp of a smile.
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William B. Deutscher
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William Jackson 21 October 2012

I like this turning of events through a moment in time, the crisp imagery, and the alliteration of the last line! This is good, best I have read in some time.

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