Down The Road To Nowhere Comments

oh this one's very good. i have a feeling we think on the same lines, at least your poems seem to reflect my line of thought.

Unlike you I cannot find the words to express the sheer human depth of this poem. Bob Blackwell below is right though, this does not have to be the end of your story. You can't win them all they say, but you can still win. Excellent write. humanity is your canvass.

Very touching, a beautiful expression Shanmugam Chettiar

Kim, this poem is well written and deserves a ten for that, but I sense a sadness in you which you must overcome. Omar Khayyam said: The moving finger writes; and, having writ, Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Whit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line, Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it. Bob