Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Down The Road Comments

Rating: 5.0

Down a road that never ends
Living life with my friends

I'm having fun can't you see
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Miranda Van Yperen
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Raymond Rivera 01 October 2009

The classic signs of first love =D I agree, do not be a slave. In fact, if you play your cards right, you can make the man in your life YOUR slave. ;)

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Nikunj Sharma 11 August 2009

nice poem............but dont be a slave, be a princess and queen and rule....till the end of time

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Darla Holt 29 July 2009

Miranda, you have written another excellent poem. Very touching. You leave me wanting to read more and more. Great job! !

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