Friday, February 16, 2018

Down The Rabbit Hole Comments

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R-ight down the rabbit hole,
Y-ou feel the pain and sorrow;
A-s you're in tough situation,
N-ot knowing if there's still tomorrow.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2018

A wonderful acrostic write that drives one to be strong despite.adversities in life. A great piece.

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Upendra Upm 16 February 2018

It is difficult to know if it is your detractors or your most valued well wishers who make you feel for any of your slips, that it is the end of everything till the next dawn when you realise that you are alive and kicking.Excellent poem.

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