Monday, June 6, 2005
Down The Passage Comments
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Down the passage that we didn’t take,
past the door we never opened, lie
goals that once we tended to mistake
as quite impossible, and still deny
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8/3/2025 5:54:08 PM # 1.0.0
This poem, in my opinion, is too much in your head. Eliot's poem has images of the heart. Even though your poem has a scholarly shine, it lacks soul. You can save it by some images with which the reader can say 'Ahhhhhh, yes.' Raynette