Monday, January 20, 2020

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Do possess dedication,
In fulfilling your duty;
Have less talk, have more action,
Sans slackness and perfidy.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Tulsi Shrestha 20 January 2020

" Allow attachments to live in your spirit, in your soul " I noticed it as the most beautiful and insightful part of your poem. So intense and touching that really moved me. Besides this, the fragrance of rhymes ensures its own excellence.

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2020

Winter or spring.....lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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